Old Dog, New Trick

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How many times should I let my old dog pee on the floor before I insist she wear a diaper? Ten? Fifty? Never? If I forgive her for wetting my rug, does that mean I also have to accept the yellow stains as part of the décor? And why, after all these years, has this smelly mutt decided now is the time to begin relieving herself by my footstool? These are important questions — questions to which the Internet offers no clear answers.

I learn a lot about myself from my dog. For example, I suspect God views my intentional “messes” and thinks: “Wow, Eddie, did you think I wouldn’t notice?” Then, through circumstances, a chastening word from a friend, or a Bible verse, I’m “crated” for a time. Cool thing is, when I climb into His lap and apologize . . . and mean it . . . our relationship is restored.

Until I mess up again.

In prayer there is a connection between what God does and what you do. You can’t get forgiveness from God, for instance, without also forgiving others. If you refuse to do your part, you cut yourself off from God’s part. Matthew 6:14 The Message (MSG)

 Jesus makes clear that to the degree we forgive others, we will also be forgiven. Almost makes it sound like conditional salvation. But what I think Christ really means is, the way we treat others reflects the degree of gratitude we have toward God. He who has been forgiven much, loves much . . . and so on.

Next week we leave for an extended vacation to California. Because of her bladder issues (or simply bad behavior), Sandy Beach will have to spend her days in a crate. I hate that for her. Until a few months ago the dog had the run of the house. I forgive Sandy for messing on the carpet, but I can’t abide by a dog that does her business on the living room floor.

Human perfection can only be found in a relationship with God based upon the saving blood of Christ. This, I keep in mind every time I fold a paper towel and soak up Sandy’s yellow stain. She’s not perfect; neither am I. We both leave our mark on others.

May we go and ask forgiveness of those we have offended . . . and likewise forgive others.

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PLOT IN ACTION! – by Eddie Jones

A Novel Idea: Story Structure Tips for the Break-Out Novelist

A Novel Idea: Story Structure Tips for the Break-Out Novelist

(excerpt from A Novel Idea)

The basic structure of plot and the three-act framework are so universal that it is embedded in our DNA (We’re born, we live, we die.) We accept the three-act structure because it echoes the structure of our days: We rise (to an adventure), work (through our problems), and we return (to somewhat of a normal home).

Act One: Familiar Surroundings Falling Apart

Every story opens with the introduction of your main character. Here the reader must have a clear sense of what the story is about. What is its tone, promise, the problem for its main characters, and the types of characters we will meet? Blake Snyder, author of Save the Cat, writes: “The Hero has to do something when we meet him so that we like him and want him to win.” This single enduring quality will bond your readers to your main character.

Though problems exist for your main character, your Lead will remain in his/her normal world unless and until something throws everything off balance. This is your Lead’s “inciting incident.” This great disturbance shifts your Lead’s life in a new direction. Many times your Lead will resist this call to action (presenting the seeds of inner conflict). In this debate section, your Lead must wrestle with a question. Here you will hint at the sacrifice to be made later. An additional element (prize or punishment) will be added to the mix and finally your Lead will accept the challenge and depart. Thus Act One will move from:

  • Introduction
  • Inciting Incident/Great Disturbance
  • Call to Action / Denial of Call / Acceptance of Call to Action
  • Identification of Your Lead’s Goal
  • Advance

The curtain comes down, marking the end of the first act. In order to move your Lead from Act One into Act Two, he/she must pass through what James Scott Bell calls a “one way door.” If your lead can return to his/her previous life, then he/she hasn’t jettisoned his/her old life for the new.

Act Two: Problems, People, and Growth

Act Two reveals your Lead’s emotional journey as he/she overcomes obstacles. As the hurdles become more frequent and larger, you raise the stakes for your Lead. Both inner and outer struggles will mark your Lead’s journey as they move toward what appears to be certain defeat. Include both reversals of fortune and unexpected blessings to give your reader both a sense of hope and dread.

Early in Act Two, change your Lead’s status. Depending on your Lead’s “normal” life, remove or increase your Lead’s power, position, and prestige. Oftentimes your character becomes the opposite of what he was in Act One. Think Harry Potter. At the beginning of each book, Harry is in Muggleland, without power, prominence, or freedom. In Act Two (at Hogwarts), Harry finds himself powerful, revered, and favored by the faculty.

Act Two will consume the major part of your story. Often called the “muddle,” the bulk of your action takes place here. Regardless of whether the conflict is internal or external, your lead must face a series of confrontations, both small and large, between him/her and the opposition. Act Two moves from:

  • Small Hurdles
  • Status Change
  • Fun & Games
  • Large Hurdles, Death, Danger, & Conflict
  • Black Moment
  • Glimmer of Hope

Act Two is an inverted mirror of your Lead’s normal world in Act One. Here, the characters from Act One appear as enlarged or diminished personalities. For example, in the Harry Potter stories, the character of Dudley Dursley (Harry’s antagonistic, spoiled, and bungling stepbrother) appears in Act Two as the antagonistic, spoiled, and powerful Draco Malfoy. (They even share the same first letter in their first name.) The first half of Act Two is the fun and games portion of the story. This often coincides with your character’s “status change.” (Again, the idea of “status change” is to flip your Lead’s position, power, or prestige. If they’re rich in Act One, they become poor in Act Two. Single in Act One? In love in Act Two. Unemployed in Act One? CEO of the company in Act Two.) Here in the fun and games scenes, your main characters bond, travel, explore, and learn about each other. Often the tone is light and painted in rich colors.

Midway through Act Two your Lead will reach a high or low point reflecting a turn in his/her journey. The midpoint is never as good as it seems or as bad as we fear, but it does mark “halftime” for your Lead’s journey. Now the stakes are raised. The bad guys become worse. The danger increases. There is a hint of death and your Lead faces conflict at every turn. Each scene brings him/her closer to the “black moment”—the instance where all appears lost.

To move from Act Two to Act Three, your lead must reach a breaking point. This is your Lead’s moment of crisis: his/her crucifixion. Here the story will demand that a principle or person be sacrificed for the good of the goal. This is the point where your Hero’s old world and old way of thinking die to the “new normal.” With nothing left to lose, your Lead is willing to risk everything for one last shot at reaching the goal. Once committed, your Lead can’t go back. He/she rushes through another one-way door.

But before you rush into Act Three, ask: Where is my tender romance scene? Where is my sacrifice scene? Where is my Lead’s disappointment scene? Where is my scary scene? Where is my funny scene? If you cannot find these scenes in your story, make a note to go back and add them later. These scenes will add richness and texture to your story.

Act Three

Thrust into another new world, your Lead faces his/her greatest fear: the one thing they hoped would never happen. This shift in direction is the second great transition. Any form of transpiration will work. The idea is to allow your reader to see your character moving toward the final confrontation. Thus, in Act Three your Lead will experience:

  • Transition
  • Walk to the Cross
  • Win or Lose
  • Climax

A mode of transportation will deposit your Lead at the edge of their internal and external battlefield. From here they will walk to his/her cross with the outcome of their journey in question. Upon reaching the summit, your Lead will face his/her final confrontation. He/she will either reach the goal or fail miserably. After the dust settles, tie up the loose ends. The ending of your novel will tell the reader how to feel and what to think about the events that just happened.

Top Tips For Overcoming Writer’s Block by Marcela De Vivo

Top Tips For Overcoming Writer’s Block

Top Tips For Overcoming Writer’s Block

Writer’s block can sneak up on you like a dark cloud when you least expect it. It impedes your thinking and creativity. Experiencing writer’s block is a writer’s worst nightmare, because sometimes it is the singular thing standing between you and getting your words out onto paper. The longer your writer’s block continues, the harder it becomes to get rid of it. That is why it’s so important to take the necessary steps to get rid of writer’s block right away. Here are some helpful tips to beating writer’s block.

Free Writing Exercises

Free writing is when you start writing with nothing in particular in mind. You just write and write without stopping for however long it takes to get the creative juices flowing. Starting by writing about something as simple as your breakfast and keep going until your mind gets into the writing space. Eventually, you’ll beat the writer’s block by pushing through it.

Free writing is a helpful exercise to do regularly. Don’t just try it when you are experiencing writer’s block. Instead, make a habit of doing it every day, or at least a couple times a week. This helps your brain stay constantly moving and keeps you creative.

Exercise

Riding a bike, taking a jog, or even just a brisk walk in the park can all be very helpful in fighting writer’s block. Exercise can clear your mind from all the cobwebs enough for a good idea to pop into your head. Sometimes it just works to hush the negative voices in your head. It can also raise your energy levels and send positive signals to your brain.

Put Away Distractions

If your writing space is filled with a hundred little distractions, you’ll never be able to rid yourself of writer’s block. Put away the knick knacks on your desk. Shut the shades of your window so you won’t stop writing to drool over the beautiful day outside. Lock away your phone so you aren’t constantly checking your text messages and taking Candy Crush breaks. Without those distractions, you’ll be able to focus on your writing.

Go to a New Location

change of scenery can be just the thing you need to start up your creativity. Staring at the same four walls every day may very well be what’s stifling you, so changing it up a bit can be helpful. Go to a coffee shop with your laptop or sit on a bench in a beautiful park with a notebook. Go anywhere that relaxes you enough to focus on your work.

Eating Healthier Foods

Your diet has a lot to do with your state of mind. When you eat junk food, your body begins to feel fatigued and heavy. By eating healthy foods that are rich in antioxidants, you can elevate your mood. With a positive mood and high energy, getting over the writer’s block will be a piece of cake.

It may even be beneficial to supplement your diet with an omega-3 vitamin. This will keep your overall health in good condition, and ensure that you’re not getting dragged down by a frustrating cold.

Keep a Notebook At All Times

One of the problems with writer’s block is that sometimes it only comes when you’re ready to write. If you always keep a small moleskine notebook with you, you can jot down ideas, phrases, lines, and other pieces of writing that come to you during the day. You’ll no longer forget the important writing moments that pop into your head during the day. Carrying a notebook keeps inspiration at the forefront of your brain.

Unplug the Internet

There’s a reason we love the internet. It has everything we could ever want: games, social media, and funny viral videos, among other things. When we’re writing, we tell ourselves that we need the internet for research or the online dictionary. However, in reality it actually serves as more of a distraction than anything. You can always go back to the internet to do research, but while you’re writing your focus should be on your words.

Writer’s block is the bane of most writers’ existences. If you try one or more of these tips while dealing with the block, you’ll be sure to defeat it in no time. Staying inspired will leave your writing fresh and always new.

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Marcela De Vivo is a freelance writer and mother of three in Southern California. As a full-time writer and business owner of Gryffin Media, she has experienced her share of writer’s block, and finds that changing up her environment helps her stay focused and inspired. Follow her on Twitter for more tips like these!

 

Middle Grade Novelist Talks Writing With Teens / Tweens

Eddie Dressed as Storm'n Norman Sloan - circa 1975

Eddie Dressed as Storm’n Norman Sloan – circa 1975

Did you like to read books when you were a child? If so, what type of book did you enjoy?

I read Tom Sawyer every year for like six years. It was my book report from 7th grade until I graduated high school. I also read Charlie Brown cartoons (back when Charlie had that huge moon head), Mad Magazine, Civil War magazines and books I ordered from school. Still have most of the books I ordered from school forms, including a Munsters novel. In fact, one of the neat things about the Caden Chronicles series is how much the three books, Dead Man’s Hand, Skull Creek Stakeout, and Dead Low Tide, remind me of those books I purchased at school.

Your first application for college admission to NC State was rejected but they finally let you in. You failed Freshman English twice. Yet you persevered and graduated with a degree in journalism. What advice would you offer to young people who enjoy storytelling but struggle with the mechanics of writing?

Turns out learning proper grammar is important. Without the basic skills you look stupid. Not that you are. It’s not that you cannot write. But the reader and editor may assume you are an unskilled writer. So work on the craft, improve on your story-telling skills, and hire a proof editor before submitting your manuscript to an agent or editor. The key thing to remember is that story trumps grammar but grammar will get you bumped from consideration.

How essential is it to earn a college degree (in writing) if one wants to pursue a writing career?

Not at all. Unless you intend to pursue a career in journalism the degree doesn’t matter. An editor or agent has yet to ask me if I majored in English or journalism. That’s the beauty of writing – it’s color blind, gender neutral and educationally unbiased. All the reader cares about is a good story.

How old were you when you became serious about writing professionally?

About five years ago. Ann Tatlock, a two-time Christy award winning author, asked me when I was going to quit my day job and write full time. I heard God in Ann’s sweet voice so I went home, sold my business, and began writing novels full time.

What advice would you give to teens wanting to become novelist?

Read books that make you laugh, cower with fear, cry and challenge you to become a better person. Then study how those authors write the story and phrases the sentences. I keep a highlighter with me at all times. I mark passages and dog-ear pages for quick reference. I also read a lot on my Kindle and highlight passages there, too.

Attend writers’ conferences, network with published authors, meet editors and agents. Finally, write. If you write 1000 words a day, five days a week, in four months you will have the rough draft of a novel. No one has ever published an unwritten novel, so write.

As an Acquisition Editor, Lighthouse Publishing of the Carolinas would you ever consider publishing a novel written by a teen?

Actually, we signed an author three years ago when she was sixteen. Her debut novel, Purple Moon, releases this September. We signed another young man last fall. He is working with our editors now. So yes, as an acquisition editor I am always seeking new, young writers.

What was the greatest thing you learned at school?

That friends are more important than knowledge. Seriously, you will continue to learn throughout your life so if you missed some things in school (as I did), you can always catch up. But you only have a few years to develop those childhood friendships. I still count my high school friends as my inner circle – those who knew me before I became a dull adult. If I were to fix the education system in this country I would start with relationships. Once we have a sense of belonging and value we can learn.

What is the best piece of advice you ever received from another author?

Quit your day job. Steven James told me this six years ago. His point was, if you don’t have a fall back plan you’ll find a way to make a living as a writer. He is correct – not to mention a very successful author.

For those who are unfamiliar with your novel, Skull Creek Stakeout, how would you introduce it?

First, it’s a fun, fast read aimed for middle school boys. I think girls and moms will enjoy it too: we’re getting nice reviews on Goodreads from teachers and mothers. The story begins when a body is found on a golf course in Transylvania, North Carolina. The victim is discovered with a wooden stake driven through his heart, fangs and bite marks on his neck. Nick is called in to solve the murder. My friend Tim Shoemaker (author of Code of Silence and Back Before Dark) called Skull Creek a cross between Scooby Dooby Doo meets Indiana Jones.

My aim is to give boys a book they can enjoy, one taps into today’s fascination with the occult. Each book in the Caden Chronicles series involves one element of the supernatural.

What was one of the most surprising things you learned in creating Nick?

That I misnamed him. In the first manuscript I sent to Zonderkidz I named the main character Boyce Kindle. Forget why. The publisher tested the name with readers and Boyce lost big time so I changed it to Nick. We dropped Kindle due to copyright concerns with Amazon and went with Caden.

Why do you feel you had to tell this story?

My goal with Caden Chronicles series is to give readers (boys especially) a fast, fun read. In middle school I had to do a book report once a year. I’m hoping teens and tweens can read a one of my books in a weekend (and I’ve heard some kids read it over night) and write a report on it. Basically, I’m trying to make it easy for them to complete a writing assignment.

With regards to the theme and importance of the story, I want kids and parents to discuss paranormal themes: ghosts, vampires, zombies, etc. I want to bring in a Biblical perspective on this. Not to preach, but to show how all these concepts can be found in the Bible and that scripture probably played a role in the development of the paranormal craze. For example, in the Skull Creek Stakeout, I explore the idea of gaining eternal life through drinking blood. Turns out Christ introduced this idea in the Upper Room when he said, “Drink my blood, eat my flesh.” He meant you would have no part of Him unless you surrendered your life to Him. And that’s sort of what vampirism is all about – the giving over of ourselves to another individual. Only with vampirism you are eternally damned, not saved. So in the Skull Creek Stakeout I show how vampirism has perverted the principle of eternal life that Christ introduced 2000 years ago.

If you could introduce one of your characters to any character from another book, who would it be and why?

I’d love to have Tom Sawyer make a cameo appearance in the Caden Chronicles. I’m a huge fan of Tom and think he and Nick would hit it off. But then they’d end up fighting over the girl and be rivals for a while but then they’d work it out and be best buds at the end.

Skull Creek Stakeout

Skull Creek

Dead Man's Hand

Dead Man’s Hand

Dead Low Tide

Dead Low Tide

Marching Orders by Eddie Jones

Marching Orders

Marching Orders

At Lighthouse Publishing of the Carolinas we do not have a business plan. We do not have a marketing plan. We do not plan.

Instead, we listen. We listen to authors when they pitch us their books and we listen to conference directors when they invite us to help teach and encourage authors. Most of all we listen to God and seek His guidance.

This is not easy. God does not deliver bullet-point outlines of how we should market His books. He also does not whisper, “Publish this novel, that devotional, and his/her nonfiction book.” So we do as Samuel did when God called to him: we rush down darkened hallways shouting, “Here I am, Lord, speak to your servant.”

How precious to me are your thoughts, God!  Psalm 139:17 NIV

Below are a few precious thoughts God has shared with this servant and how we have applied them to our publishing business.

  • First, start with the heart of the individual. We cannot pay enough for good help and good help is rare. This makes it precious. We have found if people only work for the money, they will be disappointed and disappoint us. So when interviewing authors, editors, and vendors, we seek those with a servant’s heart – those individuals who would work for free because they believe in this cause of publishing great works of literature. We do pay, but never enough. Start with heart.
  • Second, ask for help. We are in the people business and people are precious. Our books succeed when other authors help promote a title on Facebook and Twitter. We even have a program for our authors called Pay It Forward whereby our authors promote each other’s books. A little over half of our authors participate in this program. Jesus asked for help. He asked for water from a well and a colt for his short journey into Jerusalem. When you are unsure how to grow your harvest, ask for help. A few precious souls will step forward.
  • Third, accept help graciously. Expect results, not excellence. Some will try and miss the mark. Thank the individual for their effort and find a role that suits his or her skill set. A servant with a willing heart is precious, so find a task that suits their gifts.
  • Fourth, cast your net wide. Jesus traveled throughout Judea preaching the Good News. You should too. Ours is a virtual company. We have designers in Asia, marketing personnel in the Far East, and editors scattered throughout the United States. God’s Good News breaks down cultural, political, and geographical boundaries. Your hiring should too.
  • Finally, cherish God’s precious vision. His instructions for today may change tomorrow. What worked for us last year does not work today. We must listen intently for His instructions and be prepared to change our business practices.

How precious are God’s thoughts to me? They are my daily marching orders. Without them, I would be lost.

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Skull Creek Stakeout

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Press Release for Skull Creek Stakeout

Skull Creek Stakeout

Skull Creek Stakeout

Author Eddie Jones Takes Readers to Transylvania in the Newest Book in the Suspenseful YA Series, The Caden Chronicles

14-year-old Nick Caden must unravel his most bone-chilling case yet in Eddie Jones’ second book in The Caden Chronicles, SKULL CREEK STAKEOUT (Zonderkidz; $7.99, August 2013).

After barely making it out alive in last year’s Dead Man’s Hand, Nick is now a reporter for the paranormal news website, Cool Ghoul Gazette. His latest assignment is to investigate a mysterious murder in the notoriously haunted town of Transylvania, North Carolina. What’s even more eerie, the murder looks suspiciously like a vampire killing.
Skeptical that a place like this actually exists outside of a Bram Stoker novel, Nick arrives and encounters several strange characters who make his obsession with analyzing crime TV shows seem normal.

Nick learns that Transylvania is the home of vampirologists, vampire slayer gamers, and those who apparently go so far as to dress up dead bodies as  vampires to fool authorities Anyone of them could be the killer he seeks.

To track down the real culprit, Nick enlists the help of Meg, the local coroner’s assistant.  She  becomes his greatest ally, but the closer the two get to cracking the case, the more dangerous it becomes.  Little do they know someone is following their every move!

Will Nick be able to find out who’s behind this terrifying crime before the murderer strikes again? Are he and Meg next on the killer’s list?

With SKULL CREEK STAKEOUT, Jones pens a gripping plot that blends themes including the history of vampirism and our common infatuation with death and immortality.

Fast-paced and filled with twists and turns, the book will keep readers guessing until the very last page. Endlessly captivating, this newest paranormal chase in the series will have tween and young adult readers anticipating what’s next for Nick and The Caden Chronicles.

ABOUT THE AUTHOR: Eddie Jones is the author of nine books, including last year’s first title in The Caden Chronicles series, Dead Man’s Hand, which made the 2013 INSPY Awards shortlist in the category of Literature for Young People. A three-time winner of the Delaware Writers Conference and recipient of the 2011 Selah Award for Young Adult fiction for his novel, The Curse of Captain LaFoote, Jones is also a writing instructor and the cofounder of Christian Devotions Ministries.  He lives in Raleigh, North Carolina. www.eddiejones.org

To request an interview with Eddie Jones or to receive a review copy of SKULL CREEK STAKEOUT, please contact Candice Frederick at DJC Communications: 212-971-9707, Candice@djccommunications.com.

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Skull Creek Stakeout Launches Today!

Skull Creek Stakeout

Skull Creek Stakeout

Well the day has arrived. Skull Creek Stakeout released a few hours ago. Now we need to get the book off the launch pad. Here are a few things you can do to help.

1) Suggest your Fans & Followers on Facebook and Twitter buy 2 copies as gifts for young people they know.

2) Share this link on Facebook, Twitter etc and recommend your Fans & Followers post review of SKS: http://www.amazon.com/dp/0310723906/

3) Suggest your Fans & Followers contact their local media outlets and BLOGGERS you know to review it or feature it or you somehow (ezines, local papers, TV, radio, etc)

In return, we’re going to have a little fun today by rewarding those who come up with fun ways to creatively promote Skull Creek Stakeout.

Oh, and don’t forget to remind your Fans & Followers that at 2pm EST today I will be on Twitter for a Q&A discussing reading trends with kids. Encourage your Fans & Followers of to use the hashtag #SkullCreek when they ask their question. We’ll be giving away free stuff during the Q&A session to those participating.

THANKS so much! Remember: Readers Are Leaders so Buy a Boy a Book!